I am passionate about helping first-time homeowners…pursuit of homeownership. [Consider: This contains the seed of a powerful Early Influence, but it's stated abstractly. Instead of telling us "my family has been susceptible," show us a specific moment: Were you present during a confusing mortgage closing? Did you translate documents for your parents? What did you DO as a result of witnessing this? That action becomes the bridge to your career choices. Fix spelling: "complexity"]
Today, as a business and technology consultant, I leverage my technical expertise … solutions for lender partners. [Consider: This is your Career Journey section, but it currently reads like a resume bullet. Replace "leverage," "formulate," and "solutions" with concrete examples: What specific choice did you make post-college that connected to your early influence? What have you learned about yourself—not just technical skills—through working with lender partners? For instance: "Building compliance tools for a regional mortgage lender, I saw how better technology could protect borrowers—but also realized that sustainable change requires understanding both the business model and the regulatory landscape."]
To achieve my career goals, I plan to take advantage of the Harvard Business School's… [Consider: Delete this entire paragraph. Never mention the MBA program, internship plans, or what you'll learn from classmates. Use this valuable space to illuminate your vision: What problem will you solve? What role will you play? How will you structure your work to create impact? Show awareness of what it takes to achieve your goal.]
My first visit to the HBS campus was while sitting in the "Salt Harbor" case … [Consider: Delete this entire paragraph.]
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